Seekers Prelude comic 1

Please read below, need ideas

Teen rating. For blood and violence Not putting a warning cause I figure that all my regular watchers are old enough.

Well, I finally got this thing up. Been 1 week..... need to figure how to colour faster.

Anyway, decided to have a try at making proper comics over the usual Undivided comics. However, rather than launching straight in, I decided to make somekinda Prelude.

This comic is set in the middle of the daemon wars. Few years before the "Seekers" time.

Though don't really know where I'm supposed to be heading to with it. Yes It's a War. and War is hell, so there's gonna be a lotta blood. though need your opinion if the prelude has too much of it.

And yes, Daemon blood here is green.

And I somehow got a bit lazy, so the muzzle flaring isn't as good as the usual effects I do. REALLY bad muzzle flaring!!!!

Need comments bout the art as well, cause I'll be basing future comics on this art style.
Heck any comments are good.

Final note:
I'm also wondering, How many of you reading this will be interested in appearing in an antro "Squad photo" picture based on the soldiers in the comic.
Will decide if I'll make plans (AKA sign up sheet) on my journal depending on the response. So do check my journal

Update: Sign up sheet is in Entry 79 of my Journal, here: [link] so sign up for the war.

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